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Beach Blanket Blueberry- Pg 14 by ~uruseiranma:iconuruseiranma:


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Submitted: March 11, 2008
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Wow.

Well, the first page of March is here. Reading it, it feels like the bridge between Act 1 and Act 2 of a play.

One sequence I found particularly challenging but integral was the upper-right panel. We've never seen a girl change color all the way down to her feet. This angle I felt was the best way to show the final full-coloration of Tai's skin.

This page was also a challenge in regards to using the ' Pen Tool' in Photoshop. The ' Pen Tool' was integral for the cartoon-like sound effects that we see on this page, as well as setting up the page layout. With 'BBB,' I've wanted to have the sound effects play a small role in the story, and have the reader's imagination take over (imagine the headache if I had staged the previous pages with the 'Chew' text in almost every single panel-very annoying!).

I made a real effort to make the faces work in this one as well, and I finally was able to streamline the hair creation process. What once took 5 layers, now only takes 1-2 (depending on the situation and effects).

On a final note, I added a little 'Cloverfield' easter egg in this one. It should be pretty obvious. :P
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I'm guessing we'll get to see some expansion on the next page. Can't wait! This is some good stuff, you've done a great job so far and I can't wait to see more!

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"Show me your power, that I may take it from you!"
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let the real fun begin

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Salesman:What's wrong with him?
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Found the easter egg! Awesome job again! I looked forward to this for the past few weeks!
where's the sound effect you mentioned?
Oh oh oh oh oh! So beautiful! No idea if it was intention, I like the two (three I guess) round panels at the top. It seems kind of like a subtitle sexual trick, like they're her chest, especially with panel 2 giving us an above shot (even though her bangs and angle hide them.)

But the big panel on the left is my favorite. At last a nearly full body shot of an more experinced drawn Tai in her bikini (it is shrinking I see). I just hope we get another back shot before she starts blowing up (not that I'm demanding just crossing my fingers that you've had a panel planned like that for the last few years).

Oh and great effects, First one, then Mark's face, another sound, then Tai's face.

Oh inflation may begin for the next page or so. Cannot wait!

And I was afraid that one poster got your spirits down or something (y'know the note?)
i cant find the egg
is it decorative, or did the bunny make it

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I hope it's her butt and belly like that expansion from the 2005 version of the movie
Is the egg the last line?
Geat work as always. You tease with the pacing but it just makes everything more worthwhile when changes do happen, and I love the dialogue and reactions!
I love the sound effects, this story is so compelling, I get so excited each time a new segment comes out, you are doing a wonderful job :D

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